Let's Work Out The Plot

Subject: Let's Work Out The Plot Tue 12 Mar 2013, 5:07 pm

Okay guys we need to get the plot nicely organize and work out the bugs.

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Wed 13 Mar 2013, 12:20 pm

Roger that Yami-chan. As I've stated before, we could use some elements, I actually had an idea, to face many different types of enemies we could use machines to do the "monster of the role" job and they'd fit nicely too. Also I thought that we should start in pairs, as if we start all out together it's too much of a hassle, we could put a character intro. And then open the door to adventure! I'll wait for your reply Yami-chan.

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Wed 13 Mar 2013, 8:08 pm

I like your ideas, Beat! I think fighting machines would be a neat idea. ^^

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Wed 13 Mar 2013, 11:25 pm

Yeah, another thing I wanted to know Yami-chan, I like romance and in a MG role I think it's a bit of staple. But who could it be and how? I say this now because planning early is always best.

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Thu 14 Mar 2013, 4:30 am

I also thought, if you want I can go making a small topic(For Arcadia, the World I created) to describe each place in deep detail, with the pictures used at the GC.

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Thu 14 Mar 2013, 1:57 pm

Sure go for it. ^-^

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Thu 14 Mar 2013, 10:08 pm

So I was reading the plot you posted:

Overview
The World of Arcadia, A.D. 2199. Humanity celebrates the coming of the New Year and the dawn of technology towards a utopia, However, not everything is as good as it sounds, the world is in a severe energy crisis and people have even migrated to the Moon to look for a new life and somewhat relieve Earth of its energetic burden. Also, the people have developed “Logos” a type of magical code which leads the users to be able to control elements and be able to have an even better use for an increasingly demanding society. However, not everyone agrees with the government, particularly an SS criminal who opposes the use of “Logos” in society, severely attacks the administration.

In a world where values are starting to disappear and the utopia is becoming a Distopia, the wheel of fate begins to turn and a group girls…each leading a different life, each having a dream of her own, each having her own vision will be united together by the threads of fate. As the New Year arrives, each one prepares her own resolution, but…with the coming of the criminal and the crisis…what does fate awaits our heroines?

Detailed explanation.
Prior to the now “utopian world” there was a severe war for energy; people fought endless battles for apparently no purpose. Conquering other countries and such, this war was called “Las Cruzadas” because of taking of territory. Along with the war, humans developed new types of weapons called “Logos” a type of magical code which allows the user a control over the elements; in according to the user’s personality, soul and such, each has his or her own logos. With such, destructive power, the Earth’s ecosystem was damaged and the population reduced; however, 2 certain heroines named “Durga” And “Mithra” showed the people how futile fighting was, and, using their own logos regenerated the world. After her sacrifice, the world was united in a single government the “UAE” Or “United Alliance for the Earth sphere” and peace returned.

Despite many agree on the ways of the UAE, A great deal of dissent was caused by the UAE partly due to Logos' use in nearly every facet of society, and the widening socioeconomic gap between those who could and couldn't use Logos. These actions are starting to create a huge discontent and certain people are starting to lead the population against them, as those who can’t use Logos are treated like dirt; Their greatest inspiration is an SS class criminal, who by himself destroys each branch of the government to prevent the use of Logos for their own sake, that person has the Largest bounty in history and is widely sought by the Alliance and cheered by the lower class...

Amidst this changing world, certain girls, each in her own path, receive her respective logos…however…who is right? Who is evil? Which path to take, And…Just who is this criminal and why does he oppose The Alliance and does not support the Lower class? Each girl with, a different ideal, walks her own path, unbeknownst that the thread of fate has joined them all…to fight against a society with disappearing values, with little to no regard for life and each, engage in a personal war to make the world…a better place...

Plot Elements
Each person who uses Logos is bound to an element and even has a crest when activating their power. The world government users are normal, artificial logos, however, there are certain people whose power is remnant from the heroines themselves, they are called: “The children of Mithra” and “The sons of Durga” and their objective are vastly different:

The law of Mithra: The world must be led by the will of the people and theirs only. No one should oppress others; people should make their ideals reality and shape the world as they see fit.

The Law of Durga: The world must have order by absolute power. People should live their lives strictly and by rules, one must not exceed in liberation however as it leads to chaos.

The chosen ones disagree with the government yet they are powerless to do something…

The logos held by them are special and can’t be copied or reproduced, that’s why the alliance sought them and even enslaved some countries for this end.

The Emperor and Empress seek to harvest the code of people by removing their codes, those who are useless and weak are removed and they may sicken or die because of this. When a code is removed…a certain energy is emitted. They are “Haversting People” To complete the ultimate weapon, the Brahmastra, A weapon said to his any target anywhere on the entire planet. What do they plan? No one knows. It is presumed the criminal is trying to stop the construction of the weapon.

^^ These people should be our villains.

Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Fri 15 Mar 2013, 1:35 am

Like I said Yami-chan, to start besides the pair things I proposed, how about we fight the baddies together? Then said pair is on bad terms with the Government and runs into hiding, the girls are obviously overwhelmed by these events yet, they support each other rather nicely. And as they fight the baddies, Government robots, they are declared traitors and initiate a hiding course, all the while in other cities, the same happens. Whay say you?

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Fri 15 Mar 2013, 9:46 am

I like that idea, Beat. We need to create villains first though.

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Sat 16 Mar 2013, 4:52 am

So the Ideas I had for baddies at least basic were

Trans-Machina:

Equivalent of real world Machines but in a much more advanced state. It also appears to have a techno organic nature. It can convert organics into highly advanced Machines. These are moved by mass logos and as such, they’re very efficient troops, cheap and easy to produce, these were responsible for the destruction of Ignis. They surround Neo-Tokyo, serve as watchers and eliminate all their targets, despite their advanced technnology they don’t come without failure, as sometimes the Logos in them goes haywire and attack all that moves or even worse, self-destruct.

Normal Trans-machina:

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A basic type of robot, a humanoid weapon made by the government; it faces tough battles in Arcadia and obediently follows any order given by its master. Sometimes they go haywire and they have to be destroyed to prevent damage. While they’re produced en masse by the government, many rich people use them for their own purposes with licenses.

Trans-machina Zwei:

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While being lethal melee combatants, and, an updated version of the alliances’ machina weapons, they are a hasty remake of the common model. Occasionally collapses after attacks due to stress from the upgrades. Owners have to worry for their life and their wallet. Quite a pain in many ways.

Mecha Machina force
The elite of the elite of the government. They’re only dispatched when the [Magical girl team 2] is unavailable. These robots have very special Logos, allowing them to make advanced techniques and even haven a high artificial intelligence, they come in various forms and colors and even in animal forms after the Beastector project. They work in the shadows with little to none knowing about their existence.

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Beastector force.
A horrible experiment gone bad, they are a dark secret of the government, by combining logos of animals and subjects , the government created 3 half living, half machine organisms with their personalities intact but their appearance severely warped. They took a form akin to their personality, despite this they serve the emperor and fight with Arcadia’s future in mind. Due to this, they didn’t participate in the Ignis occupation.

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Known members

Lunar, the wild wolf.

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Lunar is a beastector machine shaped like a wolf. He is a hot-headed fighter who carries his laser firing gun at all times. Lunar resembles that of a wolf, wearing red armor and black pants. He believes he is the strongest and will defeat the enemy by all means possible. Also, when he picks an opponent he will try to settle things with said person one-on-one. Not being fond of groups, Lunar barely tolerates his comrades, but keeps them in high regard. He acts alone and often to first impulse, he rarely thinks ahead and thinks that the solution to any problem is force, a trait he shares with Viselik. Also, he believes he is just and his fist is justice; despite his appearance, he protects the weak. His speed is top notch and also he has somewhat of a fire control, making him a deadly opponent. However it is said he hates losing to girls…

Taurus, the singing gorilla.

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The largest member of Beastector, Tarus wears yellow armor and has a striking resemblance to an ape, though still showing far more human qualities than the other two members of the Beastector force. He dislikes battle and does so if that is the last resort. Also, he sees those who oppose the Alliance as traitors and as puny insects who don't understand what true jutice is; after the occupation, he made his resolution to fight for what he believes is good and to save those who suffer. Even with his noble intentions, Taurus believes he is the image of manliness and even sings about it. This trait extends to the point that when he looks in the mirror he cries, Manly tears for being so manly. As Lunar, he stands up for what the 3 believe is right and has somewhat of a rivalry with the latter. Taurus manipulates the earth with a very high skill and though he’s slow, a single punch of his can pierce concrete walls with ease so try to avoid him. He makes lyrics in the songs he sings, which are dedicated to his manliness…

Merco, the suave sky saber.

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The final member of Beastector is the suave, good looking, arrogant, womanizer, magnificent Merco. Based on a bird and clad in blue armor, Merco commands the sky with his aerial maneuvers and daunts enemies. His weapon of choice is his golden lance, and he defends himself with a shield. He is the leader of the force and often berates his comrades for their lack of elegance. Merco believes he is a knight in shining armor, and pretty girls are his weakness; To the point that if he meets one in battle, he kisses her hand, offers her a rose and dinner, all the while speaking smoothly. While he gives a chivalrous image, Merco is actually a womanizer and he believes the worth of a man is measured by the number of women he meets in bed. He doesn’t like engaging girls in battles but will fight with honor and great chivalry against men. Merco controls wind and some lightning, added his flight ability he is the strongest one of the Beastector. Although, the force operates in secret, it is said Merco goes to places like Kirigua and picks up girls for his “secret fanclub…” and presents them with love…

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Sat 16 Mar 2013, 9:43 am

I like these guys!! We can so have the Beastector force come in when the other robots are failing to defeat the good magical girl team. The girls and boys struggle fighting them at first and have to train.

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Sun 17 Mar 2013, 3:48 am

Mecha Machina force.

The elite of the elite. They’re on par with the Beastector force and perhaps even superior, due to the fact that they obey order without question. They were created from the latter force but apparently have more advanced codes. On Ignis they’re known as the “Nightmare Police” and are feared thoroughly, though the rest of Arcadia believes they’re Legends.

Ivanhove “Colonel”, the noble leader.

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His name is Ivanhove, but all call him for his surname, Colonel; Colonel is leader of the Force and a powerful, skilled warrior. Colonel’s leadership is the main reason why Ignis was conquered easily. He treats his men with respect and often encourages them to get better. He is noble, strong, fierce and tactical. Colonel is the example of a charismatic leader, despite this; he prefers to “die standing than to live on his knees.” The only time he throws his weapons is once he is dead or, so he says. His ultimate flaw is his pride of the Force, and he is very oblivious to the effects of his actions. He simply does what he sees is best for Arcadia, but does not realize exactly what the monarchy is up to. Generally a serious warrior, Colonel is not without mercy, as he won’t attack an injured opponent or by behind. He is the example of the force and almost all strive to live to his example. Colonel Commands energy and electricity, 2 powerful elements, thus making him a formidable rival, his swordsmanship is unrivaled except by the leader of the Beastector force, Merco.

The sky prince, Pegasion.

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An elegant robot modeled after a Pegasus, his power is only bested by Colonel and Merco. Pegasion follows Colonel without question and, to him; Colonel’s orders come before the monarchy’s own. Pegasion is an individual who strives to do what is best, a trait he shares with his Beastector cousins, to this end he, albeit unconsciously questions his enemies as to why they fight? Why do they oppose the greater good that the alliance represents? Often these thoughts haunt his mind and though, initially he takes [Team 1] as a simple nuisance, he comes to understand that they fight for cause and has a conflict between their noble actions and his undying loyalty to the Colonel. Pegasion is stoic and quiet, thus he is a hard warrior whose elegance on the battled field rivals Merco’s own.

Masaider, The earth barbarian.

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A gigantic Machina robot resembling a Rhino, Masaider commands a quarry in Ignis as per orders of the monarchy. Despite the fact that he belongs to an elite force he tends to laugh a lot and has a rather hearty and optimistic personality, though he’s serious when he needs to be. Masaider overlooks that the people of Ignis aren’t mistreated but, that is only in his mine, as others are filled with discrimination. Masaider isn’t the brightest tool in the shed and believes in the monarchy due to their power and in Colonel’s might as well. While he believes, "Might is right" he is not downright evil, and like Colonel, acts on what he believes is right. Many people in his quarry respect him and call him "boss", thus making him a hearty leader; Masaider also considers that the world needs change but he leaves the "hard thinking stuff" to his friend Pegasion and Colonel. He commandeers the earth and metal and surprisingly has special types of wheesl beneath his feet that make him extremely fast. His personality rivals with that of the Beastector’s Member Taurus. As both often spar to see who is the strongest and manliest…

Viselik, the berserk iron claw.

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Before Eis was founded, Viselik used to live on the tundra that existed beforehand, however he dreamed of making his motherland a nice place to live. To this end, he undertook lots of tasks and secretly helped the creation of Eis, in the process he became a machine and Logos dealer. One day 6 years ago, he was order to attack a suburb in Elysium to try out the Trans-machina Zwei. Reluctantly he agreed and the Zwei, demolished the place, however a mysterious attacker defeated the force and went toe to toe with him and in the ensuing battle the attacker hurt his eye and he hurt the attacker’s arm. Afterwards, despite his good intentions, he was incarcerated by the upper class to save face. Then, he was saved by Colonel and joined the force, morally destroyed, he only believes in himself, Pegasion and Viselik, as to him both, upper and lower classes are the same, none thinks for others and only thinks of them, he works for Colonel due to the fact that his job as a dealer skyrocketed. Viselik is grumpy, somewhat rude, pushy, and selfish. He has no moral belief whatsoever and often does actions based on what he thinks is the practical solution and often questions the heroes’ “justice”. He controls ice and his claw can give him some control over metal. He sort of has a friendly rivalry with Lunar, while they spar, they more or less understand and respect each other, and he even gave Lunar his trademark weapon as a gift.

Axl, the scarlet sorcerer

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Being a selfish, arrogant, egocentric machina, Axl serves the force for one reason. Riches. As in missions he is permitted to loot and pilfer by the upper class (Something Colonel berates him for) he joined the force for this reason. He is quite hedonistic, believing that life should be lived with the finest objects at hand, thus making him quite a snob. Axl is greedy to the point he looted many mines and framed the civilians of Ignis making it seem like if it was a riot. He believes the loot, power and triumph should be taken by the strong so he uses this as an excuse for his actions and disapproves of [Team 1]’s altruism and law. He controls the Earth, plants and roses above all, he has a deadly whip and a variety of unique attacks.

Elite troops BIT(Battle intelligent troops)

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A superior model of Zwei, the BITs have no control over the elements, but feature 2 energy blades in the shape of cutlasses and a shield that is highly resistant. Also, they can use energy rings to trap opponents and a basic energy ball. The elite troops commanded by Colonel and the other’s they are very expensive so, they only are seen on rare occasion.

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Sun 17 Mar 2013, 5:57 am

Incident Guide A.K.A programming of what we want.

First, besides the magical team number 2, the team 1 is going to have a hard time and if you didn’t notice I picked certain opponents for each known member so far(Who gave details back at GC) while the mecha forces will not stick with one, they will battle with the first one, mostly and the second being occasionally.

Terra/Anjyu(Said she wants wood, shape shifting or both)=Axl, Taurus, Masaider.

Beat=(Colonel, Viselik, Lunar.)

Celest=(Calls herself guardian of the heavens so I think its air): Pegasion, Masaider, Lunar.

Yami=(Presumably air, she herself said so with her character Anzu at GC)=Pegasion, Merco, Colonel.

That isn’t definitive and you may take your pick. I did it like that because either it’s same element brawl battle or opposing element battle or like in a special case an Ax to grind.

Basic incident/Event guide.

Note this is just a prototype and will change according to everyone’s will. Also I’d like to move Verdandi’s appearance to Arc 1 for more intrigue but here goes. Note that this is a "teaser" and it will be finished according to all of our wills and as such it's subject to change. Also, I refer to the username in [] due to the fact that we have no characters yet.

“Arc” 1: Those who understand each other. (わかり合う者たち, Wakariau Monotachi)

November 1, A.D. 2199. The New Year is upon the world and celebrations are going on. However the government plans many shady schemes to obtain powers unknown. To that end, they seek to capture “The Children of Mithra” said to have magical codes called “Logos” descended by the heroines themselves. In every island strange incidents are happening, but people dismiss it as coincidence, all the while the SS criminal is about to attack an unknown city…

Incident 1(November 1, A.D. 2199):

[Yami] finally has reached the age to gain Logos and is extremely happy to have magic that can help the world and finally will be useful in her family. Proud of her daughter, her parents sent her to the branch to gain her code, All the while rumors of an SS class Criminal who opposes the government and destroys their bases apparently approaches the city, [Yami] jokingly says that if he comes she’ll beat him up with her magic. On her way, Trans-machina robots start to act to act weirdly in front of her, reacting to the fact that he is a Child of Mithra and her DNA setup can’t be read, they attack the crowd. A bit scared but daring, she deduces the machines are after her. She lures them away, running in the darkness of the twilight, [Yami] finds herself cornered until the magical mascot saves her by giving her a super powerful code, while she transforms, the legendary criminal [Beat] appears and distracts the machina. [Yami] confused doesn’t get why a criminal would want to save her. She awakens as a Guardian and with her power blows the remaining machina away thus even surprising [Beat]. Confused and tired she passes out. The mascot says he detects another child and teleports away. [Beat] Can’t believe her, being so young, is so powerful and wonders if the others will be this powerful too.

Incident 2(Nov. 4 A.D. 2199):

[Celestial], living in Elysium attends a banquet party where finally the family Logos will be granted to her. Suddenly in her mansion, Trans-machina robots react the very same way they did with [Yami]. Confused and a bit scared her family encourages her to run, and she does only to find she is the target. Trying to hide, [Celetial] does everything she can to protect the city in the clouds, as the sky is very valuable to her. The mascot once again steps up and gives her code. With her newfound power of the sky, she obliterates with ease and is surprised. The mascot explains who she is and contacts [Yami] and [Beat] to tell her where she is.

Incident 2[Nov. 4 A.D. 2199]

[Yami] finds herself overwhelmed by the incidents, although happy to be powerful, her family and her may be branded as traitors and have their codes removed. [Beat] tells her it’s fine as it will be blamed on him and, the Logos she carries can’t be removed so it’s all safe. At night, after laying low on her house [Beat] explains who he is, what the “Children of Mithra” are and why he attacks the facilities of the government. [Yami] gets very indignated, as her family, friends and city were put in jeopardy by the government. And promises to help any way she can. Trans-machina overrun the streets, and they get a message from the mascot saying that he found another child and promptly heads off to find another one. [Beat] and [Yami] head off, while she says goodbye to her old life and starts anew.

Incident number 3[Nov. 6 A.D. 2199]

[Terra] A defender of Ixataca, the forest and the land, lives in peace and calm. She finds that the alliance has sent Trans-machina to get wood, but she knows better. Upon investigating, she finds that the real purpose is to drain the codes of the forest and her comrades. Indignity fills her and she fiercely attacks alone the facility where the machines reside and though she’s very nimble and powerful by herself, the machines overwhelm her, the mascot arrives and gives her a code. She uses the woods they came to destroy and shapeshifts, tearing them to shreds. The mascot explains everything to her and she accepts to go where [Celest] is, as he can only warp to one location at a time.

Incident number 4 [Nov. 9 A.D. 2199]

While on their way to meet [Celest] and unbeknownst to them, [Terra]. [Yami] wonders why the alliance is so desperate to get them, as words of the attacks on the 2 other girls has spread. [Beat] tells her all he knows is that their codes are necessary for something. While talking, Trans-machina appear in the sky ship and attack without apparent reason, both try to fight, but they crash-land into a Hierarchical city’s vicinities. [Yami] and [Beat] are separated and find themselves overwhelmed, both fight hard and though they put up a fight, they appear to have no end. Right then, [Terra] and [Celest] appear and along they manage to save the day once again. The 4 being on the same team, the mascot appears and tells them the true battle is to come.

Arc 2: Those who Doubt each other. (疑う者たち, Utagau Monotachi)

The government deems the destruction of their trans-machina and other incidents that happened as the fault of the ones who they seek. [Magical team 2] steps up but the emperor says that they have more important things to do. The empress then authorizes the use of Trans-Machina Zwei on them and if necessary the Beastector force. The group, though happy still find the fact that they are now “Criminals” to be depressing, overwhelming and dangerous. [Beat] who is accustomed to this way of life tries to act as an emotional pillar for them, as he knows it hurts being hated for no reason, no matter who you are. All the while the new machines and the B. force appear in front of our troubled team.

Incident number 1: (Nov. 29, A.D. 2199)

The team finds themselves travelling as the mascot explains what they are looking for, besides the fall of the government, a team member that can use the Logos of “Foresight” as she will be crucial for victory and posteriorly that they will grow stronger over time. As this happens Machina Zwei appear and the group winds but Lunar, the first member of the Beastector force appears and without mercy appears to overwhelm the group. They manage to survive thanks to a combination made by [Terra], [Celest] and [Yami] and escape. Lunar informs Taurus and Merco that they are indeed the chosen ones but they’re still incomplete.

Incident number 2: (Nov 30, A.D. 2199)

While the other team is on the run, members of [Team 2] appear and are on a mission to Ignis, they need to recover metal for the emperor’s “Trump card” as they go, Unknown Transmachina that aren’t from the government attack them and without mercy they destroy them, puzzled [Team 2] wonders what happened.

Incident number 3: (Nov. 31 A.D. 2199)

[Beat] feels very responsible for the depression of the group, as everyone is morally down due to Lunar’s power. Trying to cheer them up, he explains that there is a way to overcome the Beastector but they need to practice it, happy, the girls ask what it is. But, Lunar, once again ambushes them. Seeing no other option as they are in a straight road and if all stay they’re sure to be easy targets. [Beat], while encouraging had been stoic up to where they knew, changes a bit to protect them; now he tells them to go away and he’ll hold lunar. The girls tell him this is certain death, he reassures them he has a small trick and swears to meet them again. The girls reluctantly go and Lunar tells him he has no chance of winning, [Beat] smiles and replies that he “isn’t right handed.” Lunar questions what he means by that. [Beat] Unleashes the restriction on his code and assumes a more powerful temporal state, after exchanging a few blows, Lunar asks why didn’t he use it before. [Beat] tells him that, unlike his friends, his code is incomplete and doing it often is risky. Lunar commends him for risking his life but, as the battle continues, the wolf finds himself overwhelmed. In an exchange of blows, Beat falls over a cliff. Lunar, severely wounded wonders if he’s incomplete…what will the others are, as their codes are complete? [Beat], almost dead loses consciousness and is found and taken away by a mysterious girl, [Verdandi]

Incident number 4(Dec. 1, A.D. 2199):

The girls are worried about their friend, but keep going on, while they do the Zwei machine Lunar promised attack them. Leaded by Taurus, the girls swiftly destroy the Zwei Machina but when Taurus steps in, they can’t even scratch him, as the case with Lunar. The girls ingeniously combine their forces and for a while set Taurus aback but...He recovers, without energy the girls appear to be done for but [Terra] seeing how Taurus uses Earth for evil, swears to take him down. Taurus then dismisses each of her attacks but remembers Beat’s words “They’re all one.” And with sole force of will and the determination to beat Taurus, she unleashes form number 2; she then proceeds to go toe to toe with the monkey and even surpasses him, baffled he has no option but to retreat. Tired, [Terra] smiles as her friends are safe.

Incident number 5( Dec. 3 A.D. 2199):

Resting at a local City, [Yami] worries about Beat, all the while [Terra] is exhausted. [Yami] while wondering outside the city to find an escape route, is ambushed by none other than Merco. Merco tells her she’s a goddess, a nymph alive and throws a rose at her. [Yami] asks if he’s sane even. Merco replies that he isn’t she stole his sanity and heart. Sweadropping, [Yami] takes him on and find herself baffled at his moves. Merco tells her is she loses her will marry him. Angry at Merco’s attitude and remembering her injured friends [Yami] finally unleashes her power and manages to best Merco. While surprised, Merco tells her that as they are they can’t win and withdraws [Yami] returns to her friends.

Incident number 6( Dec. 4 A.D. 2199):

With[Terra] recovered, The group learns of [Beat]’s location and promptly go there. [Verdandi] introduces herself and tells them of the still unconscious boy’s wounds. While trying to establish who [Verdandi] is really. Merco appears again, and [Celest] determined to protect the injured by herself and her just recovered friends steps up. Once again Merco, does the same antics as with [Yami] but fails, as [Celest] tells him he’s not her type. The battle ensues and as expected [Celest] can at best hold Merco off, she tells him that she has a role and will fulfill it as people she loves depend on her. Moved, Merco witnesses her transformation and still injured because of [Yami], is close to defeat but retreats. [Celest] rejoices and returns to her friends.

Arc 3: Those who Fight each other. (戦う者たち, Tatakau Monotachi)

The group now recovered, faces a new threat, [Team 2] But…something isn’t right about them. Each appears to have an obsession over something, as if…they were brainwashed. Multiple times the teams clash and much to [Team 1]’s surprise, [Team 2] can also use form 2. The battle with the Beastector force and [Team 2] gets underway, all the while Lunar, Taurus and Merco begin to doubt who really is wrong and who’s right…

Arc 4: Those who Pass By each other. (すれ違う者たち, Surechigau Monotachi)

Each member having sympathized with one another begins to doubt about what the laws are, as rather than opposing, they seem parallel, complementary to one another. Each one ambushes the member who they think is wrong and besides a battle, a clash of ideals occur; after lots of battles, [Team 2] are forced out of their brainwashing and realize their enemy is the government. The Beastector force also begins to question their motives, then the government decides to play its ace…

For Peace (平和のために, Heiwa no Tameni)

For Victory (勝利のために, Shouri no Tameni),

For Reform (革新のために, Kakushin no Tameni).

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Sun 17 Mar 2013, 12:43 pm

For first thing, again I like these sets of robots as well. They're robots right?

As for planned out arcs, I like what I see so far. I need to reread it a few times to give my full opinion I like that your character and my character meet each other first. Could it be possible to have some romance? :3

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Subject: Re: Let's Work Out The Plot Mon 18 Mar 2013, 12:10 am

To answer your question: The Beastector forces are half biological, half machine that's why they think more. The Mechamachina is completely mechanic and their shape, was given to them by the ones who made the Beast force, also all Trans-Machina are robots, organic only in appearance and movement. for the other part...
Of course I love love and romance(and redundancy as you just read). while the diferences in rp are a bit significant I'm good at it, and that's a good driving force for characters. While my character is gonna be a bit of a snarky, lonely and serious person, he will enjoy the ocassional prank and "Let's play cupid!" role or, be enjoy love, albeit innocently, altogether. You just name who and I'll help you with it.

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